Tuesday, 30 August 2016

My Profile

Hi, my name is Peter. I am a year 5 at Paparoa Range School. My teacher is Mrs McGeever she is a nice teacher. I have a dog, 1 cat, 1 kitten and 2 guinea pigs. I have one brother and zero sisters. I am 9 years old. My favourite subjects at school are maths and reading. My dogs name is Max we call him Maxy. I am good at reading. I admire my kitten because he is really energetic.
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  1. Anonymous30 August 2016 at 17:22

    Hi Peter, great work on your profile today. You have included enough information to make your profile interesting. You have thought hard about what you might share with everyone. I am looking forward to reading your next post.

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  2. Miss B (Principal)31 August 2016 at 17:25

    You have a lot of animals in you family. I like the way you have used energetic and admire. These words help put a picture in the readers' mind. Tino pai! Great stuff!

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