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It is 9:30 am. Mum had just finished saying. “Time to pick up Deakyn and go to Reefton skatepark.’’

Then Locky arrived, just in time to go. I know this is going to be the  perfect day.

The trip was good. The road was smooth and I was hungry Mum gave us a wheels packet and wooly watch. The car was a mess, we stopped to pick up Deakyn. We pretended to play video games for awhile before we arrived at Reefton skatepark.

As soon as we arrived I snatched up my skateboard, jumped on and went down a steep slope. .It was fun speeding down the slope on my skateboard. I only went down once before I tried the big dome.

After I went in the big dome I had something to eat I had a packet of chip and a ribena. After the snack I felt brave enough to hit the steeper slope. I jumped on my scooter and rolled down the steeper slope. I was getting tired now. I came back to Mum for lunch. I had a chicken bun and a sandwich. This was delicious and just what I needed to skate again.

Finally I hopped on my scooter and scootered around everywhere. By this time we were all tired but before we left we went to the dairy to get a  frozen milk shake. It was very good. We dropped  Deakyn off on the way home and travelled to Blackball skatepark.

This was the best day ever. I cannot wait until next time.