3… 2… 1… Jump! As we all jumped out I suddenly felt sick as a rush of adrenaline filed me. People grabbing on to me, ear rushing past and it whistling in my ear as people try to talk. People around me as the ground gets ever closer.
Hi Peter, My name is Les from Red Hill School. I like the way you shared your post about you skydiving. Next time can you check your punctuation. I would like our school to go skydiving. Thank you for sharing your blog post with me.
Peter an excellent first writing on the topic of sky diving. Excellent use of the word adrenaline.
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ReplyDeleteHi Peter, My name is Les from Red Hill School. I like the way you shared your post about you skydiving. Next time can you check your punctuation. I would like our school to go skydiving. Thank you for sharing your blog post with me.
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