Discussion writing

Should we change the school holidays?

I wake up in the morning and I hear the rain on the roof. When I enter the living room, I look out the window and I see rain, I say to myself {not again. Not another day of rain}. These are my reasons why I think we should and should not change the school holidays.   

We need time to enjoy the holidays. This year the rain came down and people were not able to do a lot of,stuff that they wanted to do like biking, fishing and go to the skate park. But we never know what whether will do.

The weather might be great, it might be horrible. If we do change the school holidays, kids might be inside in january. And in february there still stuck inside, at home because it is raining. People can enjoy the holidays. By it being sunyer.

This year our holidays were, a massive bummer for the West coast. No one got to do much outside, stak with nothing to do but play board games, watch TV and sleep. In February it was tip-top, and studies were inside and the sun was shining all day. Parents need time of. Because there are quite a lot of, jobs to be done.

Parents need time of. Because there are quite a lot of, jobs to be done. If we do change the school holidays, the jobs will hold the people up, in the traveling season, and in the working season they are spending their days, sitting in the office doing nothing.

I think we should not change the school holidays, because jobs will hold people up and we never know what the weather will do.

                    BY PETER