This week in room fives reading sessions we have been doing stuff around the orax. On the 1 of the 11 we made ads about thneeds. this is my ad on a thneed.
Hi Peter, I like how you have used persuasive language or your poster as it makes it more interesting and persuading the readers. As I was reading I encountered some small spelling mistakes ,maybe next time you could fix up some spelling mistakes and add some punctuation. We also watched The Lorax for our sustainability kete, Did you enjoy learning about The Lorax?
Kia Ora Peter, Im Robbie from Hornby High School It looks like you have been lucky to make a poster about thneed from the Lorax. It would of been fun to make. I remember last term we were learning about the Lorax too for our inquiry about Sustainability. Maybe next time you could not put lines going over the pictures. Anyways great job Peter. I look forward to reading more of your posts!
Kia ora Peter, Thanks for sharing your ad about the Thneeds. It would be handy with the weather we are having at the moment - summer and winter in one day. With my thneed I could have a t-shirt or a jersey! I am keen to purchase a thneed, but your advertisement doesn't tell me how much one will cost me. Maybe you could add the cost to the poster. Tania
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ReplyDeleteHi Peter,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used persuasive language or your poster as it makes it more interesting and persuading the readers. As I was reading I encountered some small spelling mistakes ,maybe next time you could fix up some spelling mistakes and add some punctuation. We also watched The Lorax for our sustainability kete, Did you enjoy learning about The Lorax?
Kia Ora Peter, Im Robbie from Hornby High School
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you have been lucky to make a poster about thneed from the Lorax. It would of been fun to make. I remember last term we were learning about the Lorax too for our inquiry about Sustainability. Maybe next time you could not put lines going over the pictures.
Anyways great job Peter. I look forward to reading more of your posts!
Kia ora Peter,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your ad about the Thneeds. It would be handy with the weather we are having at the moment - summer and winter in one day. With my thneed I could have a t-shirt or a jersey! I am keen to purchase a thneed, but your advertisement doesn't tell me how much one will cost me. Maybe you could add the cost to the poster.
Tania