Monday 29 July 2019

Bleeding nose

This week in Room 5 we have written about our holiday. But we made it differently, we had to include one thing we have during the holidays and one made up thing. We also gave ourselves different names. We wrote a story and then put it in a storyboard.


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  1. This is very funny and relatable, love the name Nirm,the way you put your words on the cinema screen made for a great use of space.

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  2. hi peter this is ahi i like your storyboard because it is nice and colourful. But can you try to make the writing a bit bigger. Good job keep up the good work

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    1. Thanks for the comment. If you click on it will become enlarged.πŸ˜€πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜Ž

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  3. Hello Peter,
    Way to go with the storyboard message.
    Cheers

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    1. Thanks Miss B.πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ˆπŸ˜€

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