Persuasive writing house writing

Just so My teacher knew what I am capable of in writing, she asked us to write about a picture. Here it is.

In my opinion this house is absolutely legendary because there is an awesome view, its private and I can have lots of animals. Let's get started.

Firstly, I believe that I should live here because the view is amazing picture this, it's the end of a long day, you just want to sit down and enjoy the nice view, but you can’t when you are in the city. Living here the sunset would be incredible.

Secondly, it is private. You have no neighbours so you can do what you want without anyone to criticise you. For example, if you decided to have a helicopter, you can’t disturb anyone.

Finally, you can have lots of animals. If you wanted you could have as many different colored chickens as you what, maybe a horse or two. The possibilities are endless.

In conclusion I believe that I should live here because the view is amazing, it is private and you can have so many animals.